You’re exploring a fascinating and complicated concept here in an engaging and entertaining way. Examining the question of what makes us who we are – our history or our actions – and if we have no memory of our history, is it still shaping us? There is a lot that is working nicely, but other elements that can be strengthened in order to get the most emotional punch. Overall, though, you’ve found a lovely balance between humor and pathos, and there were several wonderful moments of real connection and meaningful searching for what matters in life and how we know who we are.
Screencraft 2021 Feature Competition